Wednesday, June 10, 2009

This is how I love.

Dedicated to the Stuart Little in my life.
[With all of the love a little Margalo is capable of.]

I love you so
that Tears in your eyes
cause mine
to blur too.

When you light up
and drag the smoke deep
My lungs turn to coal
my chest tightens too.

A harsh word from you
that cold shoulder?
breaks my tiny heart,
slaps my crestfallen face.

We meet when you please,
It hurts to have no say,
waiting is agony,
our time e'er constrained.

When I'm second place,
my feelings runners up,
To be less of a burden,
I know why your back aches.

I listen to you simply
because what makes you happy,
is always above all,
my joy lies in your laughter.

Haven't you realised yet?
I notice what matters to you,
your opinions mean the world
I listen, I notice, I do.

I yearn for a hug,
a loving look,
a playful nudge,
footsie under the table.

When you spend a penny,
it pinches my wallet.
When you have a cold,
its my nose that sniffles.

When you stand up for me,
I feel less alone.
When life is a burden,
you make me whole.

Your sleepless nights,
cause shadows 'neath my eyes.
Your troubled days,
leave me in great distress.

For me you are foremost,
what makes you happy
above me,my ego and pride.
Don't you see it yet?

Am I not worthy of
more than stolen moments?
Am I not to be put,
first, above all,sometimes?

I do not fear you dying,
your breath and mine are one,
I need not love you more
After you pass on.

I know you don't know why,
Maybe I will tell you
When your heart beats it's last,
mine stops ticking too.

36 lost souls found themselves in my mirror....:

ruSh.Me said...

WAh! That's amazing!! A picture worth a 100 words and the 1000 words depict everything!!

chirpy-paaro said...

wooww... long way to go gal...this is ultra romantic!! keep up the good work!!

Solilo said...

WOW! Those are some hardcore romantic lines and that picture is fab too ;)

Satans Darling™ said...

OMG. What amazing work girl :) I feel like dedicating it to someone :P

Zeba Talkhani said...

Wow. Amazing. U have an amazing talent of putting to words what u feel!

CoFfEe AnGeL said... : thanks :o) finally the net returns eh?

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@Chirpy paaro : Long way to go?? Je ne comprendez! pls explain :)

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@Solilo : Its just how I am :D

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@Satan's Darling : I would've dedicated it but ... I think he'll know himself.

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@ Zeba : I told u...thats the way I write.nothin frilly or fancy. just me and what i feel within me.

Aw.S.M said...

Hey there...u r a swell poet u know :).

particularly loved the last 2 verses...very touching.

guess i ll have a look around eh ..:)


CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@aMITH : AW I'm no any professional will tell u :) but am glad u liked it and do look around. Be sure to leave ur comments...i value those a lot!

Hopeless Romantic said...

ah....mushy to the core...lovely poem...ur turning into lyricist:)

Following ur blog for some time..nice thoughts collection..keep penning:)

Cheers! Do visit me!

Happy blogging!

Aniket said...

WOW! This is the best one I've read here. Could relate to it on so many levels.

"When I'm second place,
my feelings runners up,
To be less of a burden,
I know why your back aches."

Loved it. Absolutely and completely!

Badz said...

Awww.... That was soo m=nice to read. It bought tears to my eyes. :-|

Sucharita Sarkar said...

Wow, that's being really-truly-deeply-madly in LOVE!!!

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CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@Hopeless romantic : Hey! and welcome to my blog [officially]...I too have been readin ur blog :o) will comment in a few days!

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@ Aniket : Dude you have the sensitivity of a girl :o) And i mean it complimentarily...if only more guys were like thou!!

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@Badz : I'm going to write something that will bring a smile to ur face!!

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@Sucharita : You bet...

The Rainmaker said...

this is really beautiful...sounds like ideal love...
how i wish someone loved me like that... :)

keep blogging...


Tales From the Dark Side

Ruchika said...

Nicely written..
I like the sentimentality behind it. The vice comes out brilliantly!!!

I can understand exactly what you're talking about. :)

Love ya!

Ruchika said...


Nick said...

Sweta....This is truly romantic and very sentimental!
Every poem dedicated to me or r relationship makes me fall in love with you more n more.
Sorry Margalo:(!

Keep writing such original stuff :).

Love ya tons!

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@The rainmaker : Thank u :) will be visiting ur blog soon!

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@Ruchika : Vice? Not me!! But appreciate ur compliment...and he did get it... :)

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@ Stuart : Mwah to u too.

Sara said...

You are a hard-core romantic angel...hope this doesn't weather out with time...keep it up!!

Pesto Sauce said...

So romantic....must say your Stuart Little is really lucky

Crafty Shines said...

hey coffee! lovely lovely lines!!!!

will stuart stop lighting up?
i sure hope so!

hugs for ur thoughts nd intensity of love gal!

luvya! :)

Dok Saab said...

I too am your fan.
I do not comment doesn't mean I do not read your writes.

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@crafty Shines : HEY! Stuart has cut down comsumption by 1/ hes on his way as am I!
*HUGs and A BIg fat Squeezy*

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

@Doksaab : I know sir... :o) U have encouraged me so much, to write and to be a better person :o) I know ur busy...and i appreciate the time u take out despite it all to read what i write :D...and i know, and i always say...Patientss first, always!

Crafty Shines said...

hey coffee! no post since so long...

all ok???

me miss u!!!!

~*~ Jal Pari ~*~ said...

Nicely written. Very romantic.

Love your blog. Will be coming back soon :)