Questions are so many,
but answers are few.
All I know is that
I miss you.
When my phone rings,
I hope its you.
In the crowd, my eyes
search for you.
Every now and then,
I think of you.
Does this happen to u too?
Why does the day seem brighter
after talking to you ?
Why does Life become beautiful
when m with you?
Why is my mind filled of
thoughts of u?
Do you have answers to questions so few?
Questions are so many,
but answers are so few.
All I know is that
I like you.
Why do I wana come all the way
Just to see you?
Why to I always ask to meet you?
Why do I wana spent
all my time with you?
Why isn't my day
complete unless I talk to you?
Questions are so many,
but answers are so few.
Do you think that
I m falling in love with you?
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17 lost souls found themselves in my mirror....:
like it!!
" When my phone rings,I hope its you.In the crowd, my eyessearch for you.Every now and then,I think of you.Does this happen to u too?"....
Yes...
liked the poem!
Honest thoughts flowing there. Me likey! :D
very lovey dovey :)
but sweta, the sms words (m/u)sort of take away from the feel of the poem, so maybe you could consider changing them...
but who is abinitio?
Oh when you're young and inlove!:-)
This is a very sweet poem...but I have to agree with Little Girl...SMS lingo distracts the fluidity of this poetry.
Reminded me of the exhilirating early days of love. (long long ago, more than 10 years, more like...17/18?)
Love is in the air. That's what a lot of posts here say. ;)
Like it.
Who is Abinitio?? ;)
Your BF?
As Sucharita has mentioned above, it's a mushy mushy lovestruck teenage love....sweet !!!
awwwww! what an adorable description of longing!! me likes very very much! my praises to be forwarded to abinitio!
yur guy would be happy to read this
chriz
loved it :)
Love the poem. :-)
So was that how you were feeling/thinking at the time when writing it??
PS. Sorry I forgot to inform you, I've made my blog, It's http://dreamybadz.wordpress.com/
Sorry. :-S
Best part of this poem is the simplicity of language
@EvERyone : Thank u on behalf of Abinitio [who is too modest to reply himself grr].
Now,
the sms lingo, i agree :) if u read my previous posts, ul see the change now :) but i'll tell abinitio to keep it in mind. [this is an old poem, just wanted to publish it as it is :) ]
Abinitio is not my BF! Not NOt! now that his horror is quelled...he is a college buddy! my only college buddy right now in fact.my bf is nikhil :)
My guy wud b happy to read this if i wrote it :) but since i didn't, and its not for him per se...he is not v.fond of reading anyway [just what i write and the newspaper]
I will pester abinitio to write more and will keep posting. eventually he will have to interact himself!
"the sms lingo, i agree :) if u read my previous posts, ul see the change now :) "
ROFL!!!!
@Aniket : Glad u followed up!! And laughin!
Yes, Yes Yes.
The answer the question! :)
Nice one.
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