Mon ami the raindrops
pittering
pattering
on my window...
I wait to watch
you drive up my gate
I bear your favorite
butterscotchy iced treats.
And you mon ami
bought me ice lollies
you know i love
them in the rain
not knowing if what
grazes my tongue is
a raindrop or the
gently melting delight
on a stick
coloring my tongue
fuschia.
To top it all,
Your moist kisses,
mingling with them both,
completes my heart's
trembling joy
like nothing else
mon ami
ever has
ever could.
Friday, May 08, 2009
Mon Ami, the Rain and You.
spun from dream-dust into a mirror by coffeeismypoison at 8.5.09
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41 lost souls found themselves in my mirror....:
My my.... everyone is showing their lusty side today. :D
Lovely pic and sweet poem to go along with it. Nice touch of french to add flavor too. :D
everyone who??
Its the rains...i want rains and lollies and mon ami!!
I meant Ki and you. :P
hmmm... nice... really nice ;)
Ah, see what rain can do!
My version is not romantic but all the same, rain evokes certain moods..always!
mothers day or valentines day?
mushy mushy
chriz
Someone is in LOVE. Mushy.. ;)
@sumit : Hmm...thank u...thank u ;)
@The girl from cherry blossom street : this is the emotions the rain evokes in me...most consistently...love lollies and love in the rain!
@Chriz : Neither!! Missing my love!
@ Solilo : Yep ... totally flat out in love [touchwood.]...sigh... ;} am a romantic at heart...
Whoa!!!!!
i miss being romantic in the rain bang in the middle of summer and its all ur fault!!!!!! :D
i loved it Coffee!!! its beautiful...it totally has the right amount of mush & lust...
now i want lollies, rain, bf...et all!!!! :P
Nice romantic poem. Someone was in a romantic mood. ;-)
Nothing like the rain to bring out the poet in us. And you are surely multi-talented - a doctor, a poet...and?
BTW, how's the detox-diet going on?
@Crafty shines : IF thats the way u feel then ... mission accomplished! I wish there were more rains though, and more times in the rain with my beloved.
@sucharita : Ah rain :) but im no poet...except occasionally...will update on the detox in a few days:)
@Badz : well...5 times a day at least, I'm in a romantic mood...lol...!
Thanks for visiting my blog and for your comment! I'll be coming back to yours as well.
Love your words here! Enjoyed your blog!
Didn't read the post as usual. But lovely pic.
And previous pics also suggest that LOVE IS IN THE AIR. This page is getting romantic....I should visit regularly.
@Sylvia : Hey... thanks for coming! I stumbled upon ur online novel and have started reading :) looking forwward to it...
@Kasana : Hey I was always romantic! Always always...plus this was a v.short piece!read read read!
very mushy:)
it has everything. Taste , color, touch... sight..
beautiful
Thats amazing!! Love the rhythm of the poem... just like rain drops. :)
thanks for visiting my blog and sorry for being late in paying a return visit :)
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I love the part where you talk about the lollie grazing your tongue, and coloring your tongue fuschia, something about it brought a smile to my face! :)
@Gauri : Welcome to my world!
@Lena : Better late than never! Glad u liked my poem :)
@Shoe girl : That was the hope!
@ SsQuo : Probably made u smile cos u thot of a kid sticking his tongue out all pink n purple!
Man i'm going to the market and getting vegetables...but lots of lollies too!
mmmmmmm... so very sensual...
i don't know how you meant it, but i took all the references to lollies and popsicles and iced treats and things you can lick and suck and turn from hard to mushy just by licking and sucking and that feel so good in the mouth, i took them all as Innuendoes. i'm sure they were poetic metaphors...
delicious ... very very delicious...
@ LGL! : Finally ur here...hmm...food for thought, exactly how Freud would've interpreted it!! hmm... time for a cure!
Hmmm !!!
Someone going to be very Rich.
Hey Man ...CONGRATS !... :)
@Kasana : WHat? I am...how??
Not you but the guy who gonna get you...he goin to be rich.Cause you said you always been very romantic... :)
he is rich! I'll tell him u said that...he'l be so pleased...but u shud know hes v.romantic too!
nice one...
In my lineofsight
Thanks Amal...will check ur blog too...
thn I Hate both of you....you lucky buggers... :)
wwoooww... so sensuous... amazing combo of butterscotch.. ...lollies..kisses and heart.. :P
beautiful..btw i also liked the heart in ur blog theme...
is there any chance u could share that photo?
@Rukna : Thanks for coming here!!The theme is not mine to share...click on the orange bar and ul be redirected to the tmeplate site :)
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