NOTE : Pink mist is basically how the bomb squad refers to you when you blow up. There are many other definitions as well, as per google. The reason I wrote on this phrase is because it isn't often that we come across a beautiful word for something gory and ugly. I am not suicidal or depressed or anything of the sort!!
Turn me into pink mist dear God,
and make me forget.
The horrors I've seen
and never let me see
what lies in further store for me.
Turn me into pink mist my friend,
I cannot bear it anymore,
the blood, unfairness, backstabbing and gore.
People being one thing to your face,
behind it meaning much,much more.
Turn me into Pink mist buddy,
No one listens anymore,
Everyone thinks they're perfect,
Other's opinion's matter no more,
We talk to ourselves, content in ourselves.
Turn me into pink mist God,
What is the point here?
We save lives, they die someday,
but do they learn?
Life's important lessons?
Take me into your arms my Lord,
Or teach them life is not too short
nor long, the trouble lies not in it's length.
We don't know when in fact,
it is going to end.
Take me into the wind my friend,
they still don't learn each moment counts,
still are rude and impolite,
compassion seems so far, far away.
And for those who are ...
trying to grow in your image,
they're are mocked, Fingers pointed,
unappreciated, laughed at, scorned.
Turn me into pink mist my God,
It hurt's to be different, ignored.
Blow me into your miracles God,
the rain, wind, grass, sun and snow.
I have no strength what you see
[is just for show.]
take me into your arms, give me respite.
I cannot fight anymore.
Saturday, August 01, 2009
Turn me into pink mist.
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23 lost souls found themselves in my mirror....:
The Poem is good, thoughts are deep, very well crafted,
but then I do not like this defeatist attitude coming from you, Sweta.
I hope this is just a creative exercise and not your point of View :)
This is a big bad world...
I recall a song from Mother Idia...duniya main hum aaye hain to jeena hi padega, jeevan hain agar zeher to peena hi padega
beautiful but a bit depressing...nicely crafted! :)
Very good expression of the angst of a modern woman fighting against ...misconceptions and prejudices?
This is a beautiful post doctor.There come times when you are just so hurt,fighting the welled up tears that seeking refuge only in the Almighty works.Trust Him whatever it is,will go away :)
@Dok saab : I knew u would be concerned Sir...I am ok...just having a few wierd days. Where I can't understand whats going on around me :o)
@Pesto Sauce : Hmm...I haven't seen the movie but am familiar with the song. I hate poison.
@Tongue fu lady : I can never get over ur nickname...its awesome :) yeah this is depressing cos I am a bit low :)
@Sucharita : well yes..that and that among other things...simply put I have a simple mind. Am honest and cannot understand too many complexities. certainly i delve into the depths of everything but thats only to understand the basics!
@Pg : Thank u doc...am praying :o)
first time on your blog. just loved yur tempelate.
very emotional and touching thoughts. pierced right upto the inner chord of my heart
@Anju : Welcome to my blog...am v.confused about my template...some love it others hate it equally vehemently :( hope u read and keep reading and commenting as ur comments means a lot :o)
Echo to Doc Saab. Its one of your best works writing technique and structure wise. But I can only wish that you find your fighting spirit back soon. Be strong and strike. :)
@Aniket : *bowing*... i'm FINE!! I swear...let me prove it to u...tomorrow im going for love aaj kal. it just happens sometimes u know?u see ppl being nasty to each other...deliberately trying to see only and only the negative side of ppl as if, as if as IF we each r perfect!
whew.
I'm fine i really am. I'll write a funny post soon ul see :oP
this is so beautifuilllllllllllllllllllllll!!!! sigh sigh sigh!!!
magical milady!
magical!
p.s. i m going insane with the magic thing :P
so excuse my gettin carried away!
One of the most strong poems I came across lately. Makes you think in what kind of a world we live. Really good work here :)
@AD : Magicv is marvelous...one can never get too carried away with it ;)
@Lena : Sometimes in bad mood i see this aspect of the world...its not so bad.i mean, the bad stuff is there allright...but theres good stuff too :)
I like all your poems...Very romantic and meaningful! keep it up!!
Very nice, i'm impressed
turn her into pink mist, dear god. but not on my manicured lawn, please, dear god :)
@ Little Girl Lost
Ha Ha Ha !!
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