Dedicated to the Stuart Little in my life.
[With all of the love a little Margalo is capable of.]
I love you so
that Tears in your eyes
cause mine
to blur too.
When you light up
and drag the smoke deep
My lungs turn to coal
my chest tightens too.
A harsh word from you
that cold shoulder?
breaks my tiny heart,
slaps my crestfallen face.
We meet when you please,
It hurts to have no say,
waiting is agony,
our time e'er constrained.
When I'm second place,
my feelings runners up,
To be less of a burden,
I know why your back aches.
I listen to you simply
because what makes you happy,
is always above all,
my joy lies in your laughter.
Haven't you realised yet?
I notice what matters to you,
your opinions mean the world
I listen, I notice, I do.
I yearn for a hug,
a loving look,
a playful nudge,
footsie under the table.
When you spend a penny,
it pinches my wallet.
When you have a cold,
its my nose that sniffles.
When you stand up for me,
I feel less alone.
When life is a burden,
you make me whole.
Your sleepless nights,
cause shadows 'neath my eyes.
Your troubled days,
leave me in great distress.
For me you are foremost,
what makes you happy
above me,my ego and pride.
Don't you see it yet?
Am I not worthy of
more than stolen moments?
Am I not to be put,
first, above all,sometimes?
I do not fear you dying,
your breath and mine are one,
I need not love you more
After you pass on.
I know you don't know why,
Maybe I will tell you
When your heart beats it's last,
mine stops ticking too.
Wednesday, June 10, 2009
This is how I love.
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36 lost souls found themselves in my mirror....:
WAh! That's amazing!! A picture worth a 100 words and the 1000 words depict everything!!
wooww... long way to go gal...this is ultra romantic!! keep up the good work!!
WOW! Those are some hardcore romantic lines and that picture is fab too ;)
OMG. What amazing work girl :) I feel like dedicating it to someone :P
Wow. Amazing. U have an amazing talent of putting to words what u feel!
@Rush.me : thanks :o) finally the net returns eh?
@Chirpy paaro : Long way to go?? Je ne comprendez! pls explain :)
@Solilo : Its just how I am :D
@Satan's Darling : I would've dedicated it but ... I think he'll know himself.
@ Zeba : I told u...thats the way I write.nothin frilly or fancy. just me and what i feel within me.
Hey there...u r a swell poet u know :).
particularly loved the last 2 verses...very touching.
guess i ll have a look around eh ..:)
luv
amith
@aMITH : AW I'm no poet...as any professional will tell u :) but am glad u liked it and do look around. Be sure to leave ur comments...i value those a lot!
ah....mushy to the core...lovely poem...ur turning into lyricist:)
Following ur blog for some time..nice thoughts collection..keep penning:)
Cheers! Do visit me!
Happy blogging!
Amit
WOW! This is the best one I've read here. Could relate to it on so many levels.
"When I'm second place,
my feelings runners up,
To be less of a burden,
I know why your back aches."
Loved it. Absolutely and completely!
Awww.... That was soo m=nice to read. It bought tears to my eyes. :-|
Wow, that's being really-truly-deeply-madly in LOVE!!!
@Hopeless romantic : Hey! and welcome to my blog [officially]...I too have been readin ur blog :o) will comment in a few days!
@ Aniket : Dude you have the sensitivity of a girl :o) And i mean it complimentarily...if only more guys were like thou!!
@Badz : I'm going to write something that will bring a smile to ur face!!
@Sucharita : You bet...
this is really beautiful...sounds like ideal love...
how i wish someone loved me like that... :)
keep blogging...
Raunak.
Tales From the Dark Side
Nicely written..
I like the sentimentality behind it. The vice comes out brilliantly!!!
I can understand exactly what you're talking about. :)
Love ya!
*voice
Sweta....This is truly romantic and very sentimental!
Every poem dedicated to me or r relationship makes me fall in love with you more n more.
Sorry Margalo:(!
Keep writing such original stuff :).
Love ya tons!
@The rainmaker : Thank u :) will be visiting ur blog soon!
@Ruchika : Vice? Not me!! But appreciate ur compliment...and he did get it... :)
@ Stuart : Mwah to u too.
You are a hard-core romantic angel...hope this doesn't weather out with time...keep it up!!
So romantic....must say your Stuart Little is really lucky
hey coffee! lovely lovely lines!!!!
will stuart stop lighting up?
i sure hope so!
hugs for ur thoughts nd intensity of love gal!
luvya! :)
I too am your fan.
I do not comment doesn't mean I do not read your writes.
@crafty Shines : HEY! Stuart has cut down comsumption by 1/3rd...so hes on his way as am I!
*HUGs and A BIg fat Squeezy*
@Doksaab : I know sir... :o) U have encouraged me so much, to write and to be a better person :o) I know ur busy...and i appreciate the time u take out despite it all to read what i write :D...and i know, and i always say...Patientss first, always!
hey coffee! no post since so long...
all ok???
me miss u!!!!
Nicely written. Very romantic.
Love your blog. Will be coming back soon :)
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